Sunday, 10 September 2017

LINE by Natasha



Black, Red, Suit, Tie, Clothing

"Ten minutes and I will be out."
Judith checked her watch as she entered the mall.  "Thank God!  It's just three people." She ran and joined the line behind the three men,
Ten minutes. "Why is this line not moving." She checked her watch,  five minutes more.
"Why are you not moving? Look, the opposite line, people are going in."

No response.

"You could at least acknowledge my comment with a nod."

No response.

People were beginning to stare at her.

"Hey don't just stand there, move in Mr."

People were really beginning to stare.

"I don't have time for such rudeness"
She marched to the front of the men and stamped her feet there, determined to enter after the next person on the other line.

She turned to the people staring "What!?" A lady walked up to her
"Honey, who are you arguing with? ."

"What do you mean. These rude men!" Judith squared on the men behind her, ready to launch a speech on respect.  For the first time,  she noticed the shiny wooden face of the men and their pencil drawn eyes.  The words died in her throat.
She clutched her bag and tip-toed out.


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